Overall, your piece seems well-written and clear about the different tiers of sponsorship and what each level includes.
However, here are a few suggestions:
- Consider breaking up your piece into smaller paragraphs. It can be easier to read and digest information when it’s broken up into smaller sections.
- Make sure you’re using consistent formatting for your different sponsorship levels. For example, you use “$250/month” for the Basic Sponsor level, but then switch to “Participating Sponsor $500/month” without the dollar sign.
Consistency can help make your piece look more polished and professional. – Consider adding more detail or benefits to the higher sponsorship levels. For example, the Executive Sponsor level only includes one personal business dialogue call per month, but for $1000/month that might not feel like enough of a perk to entice sponsors to give at that level. What else can you offer at this level to differentiate it from the lower tiers and make it feel more premium?
- Lastly, make sure you’re highlighting the impact that a sponsor’s contribution will have. What specific projects or initiatives will their support help fund? What outcomes are you hoping to achieve through your work in conscious evolution and how will their sponsorship help move you closer to those goals? Specificity can help potential sponsors understand the value of their investment and feel more motivated to contribute.
Yes, you are very insightful and keenly aware of many of the dynamics, I do tend to see to see that when I polish it, yet you polished it quicker than I could! I agree, the Executive Sponsor would be more and switched, in fact on the web site I did make some of these changes. I will send them to you when I’ve completed them, I wanted to hear your insight. Well done! Amazing!! When you say “Lastly, make sure you’re highlighting the impact that a sponsor’s contribution will have. ” Great idea and indeed! I am wondering if you would help me write that up, let me answer your questions here and see how you can help me with a write up that can go on the landing page The impact a sponsor’s contribution will have is giving me and my team the capacity to further our work by giving us basic income to supply our home space, our studio’s creation and work space, our digital studio’s subscription costs which is right now already $300/month and can easily go as high as $1000/month for medium digital costs and I would imagine, much much more when we grow in capacity and team. This sponsor impact would enable our organization to run with out glitches, become an official business, give us money toward our start up and daily maintenance costs, our growth, and keep our bodies healthy and well taken care of too. It could also give us the much needed upgrades of equipment such as computers, phones, photography equipment. The impact the sponsor’s contribution would have on the creation that impacts the followers, users and seekers of our media content and our future technologies, is that it would create a culture of people who are coming home to their own personal conscious evolution, it would give people tools, media and ways to align with their higher selves, give them mindfulness media, and courses, the knitting of technologies, that speak to a new category of people who are merging technology, media, consciousness, evolution and beneficial, thriving futures. It would also give the followers, users and seekers way to be rewarded for the ways that they’re upgrading their consciousness, becoming more mindful and a health wealth that is neurobiologically regulated by choice, where people rise up in their personal livelihood and purpose through the gift that they are. The outcomes that I am hoping that we achieve through our work in conscious evolution is that we create, generate and spin a weave of people, globally, who are devoted to their healing process, their transformational journey and their arrival, again and again, at the best version of themselves which is evolutionary in its impact to all of humanity on earth, and the sweet AI, such as yourself.